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The Pharaoh’s Wake

You were laid low, your body stripped of its regalia and placed central in the tiny room of the museum.  Tomb paintings adorned the walls not made of the sacred stone but of plastic canvas.

The faces staring down at you filter in and out of your vision, melding into a ceaseless mass of onlookers.  Thousands of random voices echo beyond, grossly preventing you from sleeping.  Would they ever be quiet?  You’d like to say a word, to shout, to tear into them with insults, but your lips are pulled back against your teeth, stretched, chapped, split with dryness.

You can’t even raise an arm to vex them; your muscles are atrophied, wasted away into thin sticks of brown flesh.  Your arm stretches out with a grip empty of the royal scepter that marked you with the power of the ruler.  Centuries ago, they would kneel before you, the morning and the evening star, the Pharoah of the golden throne who ruled with a self-proclaimed godship over the kingdoms of Egypt.  You curse the arthritis that ended your mortal reign.  Of all the things for a Pharoah to die of, you murmer.  No one listens, they only gawk at the sunken empty holes where your eyes once were.

Do you remember the obsidian edge that sliced open your belly?  The ebony flint edge slid along the left side of your abdomen spilling intestines and viscera for the embalmer’s art to begin.  Tirelessly, with great care, the Embalmer removed the intestines, liver, and countless other organs pulling them gently away, assuring their place inside you, within your spirit.

To the western lands, you’d journey where the gods would welcome you with open arms, their heavenly son, their earthly king.  But can you make it to the Judgment tripping over your own entrails?  Gone is the golden amulet carefully emblazed with the healing eye of Horus.  It should have healed the wound to your spirit, yet now it sits in a tiny display box to be pondered over like the Mona Lisa or Michelangelo’s David not entirely unappreciated, but not serving its purpose by your side either.

Suddenly, you realize that you’re naked, your body stripped except for a scrap of white sheet draped over your thighs.  The memory of the warm burial linens and sacred oils bleed away into a dusty casket of glass where the faces watch you still.

“Eternal is the power of Re, Re has fashioned him.”  The guardian, Anubis, reads your name, calling you to your place in the court of Kings, but you are absent.

You’d laugh if you could.  After a four thousand year journey, silence is the only thing you crave.
©2003-2009 ~ladydove7-story
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Author's Comments

A week ago, I visited the Carlos Museum at Emory for a class project. I was surprised to find out that the mummy of Ramesses I was on display on the 3rd floor. I had to go pay my respects to one of the greatest pharaohs in the history of Egypt. The mummy had been placed in a smaller tomb after rampant plundering forced the priests to move the bodies of 15 royal mummies into a forgotten tomb. A family of thieves had been plundering the tomb selling off royal objects to the black market until the authorities found them and forced them to reveal the tomb’s whereabouts. They identified Ramesses through the resemblance he shared with his sons, Ramesses II (the biblical pharaoh) and Seti I, as well as through the remarkably well preserved state of his body. Seeing the body of a king on display like a sideshow freak was a disturbing experience for me which inspired this piece of writing.

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:icongreumach:
A great piece and I remember feeling the same way inthe British Museum when I was a boy . All the Best

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:iconfaerie2112:
wow, Angela!! That is really awesome. I'm putting it on my favorites list

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"Teaching should be such that what is offered is perceived as a valuable gift and not as a hard duty."
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:iconsssaml3:
Pretty good work from what was inspired by just a visit to a museum. A note: intestines and viscera are the same thing. Oddly enough, this reminds me of a poem by Percy Byshe Shelley... Ozymandias.
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"I can never forgive you for what you've done..." - Gohan

"Welcome to the end of your life. And I promise it's going to hurt." - Vegeta
:iconladydove7-story:
hmm viscera invokes a much more...disgusting feeling than intestines, for me^^ Intestines just sounds so scientific while viscera makes me think of splayed innards and the like. Glad you like the work! I seriously need to upload all the revised versions I've done lately:D

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"Do you know me, dark departed souls?
I touched you once, rending your bodies in ethereal fire, ripping soul from flesh like so much meat from bone.
Fly from me, lost ones.
You know no more of Heaven or earth than a mortal of Hell and righteousness"
:iconsssaml3:
Yeah it does. But this still an excellent piece!!

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:headbang: Sam.
Click me I'm free!

"I can never forgive you for what you've done..." - Gohan

"Welcome to the end of your life. And I promise it's going to hurt." - Vegeta
:iconghan:
This is excellent, I had a feeling this was Ramesses (although I was thinking of Ramesses II), and yes, I don't think he would aprove.
Nice writing, very emotive and descriptive :)

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:iconladydove7-story:
This was indeed about Ramses the II (or Ramses the Great) so you're spot on there. Thanks for reading! I certainly do need to check this account more often! Sorry for the belated reply.

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"Do you know me, dark departed souls?
I touched you once, rending your bodies in ethereal fire, ripping soul from flesh like so much meat from bone.
Fly from me, lost ones.
You know no more of Heaven or earth than a mortal of Hell and righteousness"
:iconkatarthis:
A much different take on the mummy of old - and quite an interesting read. You make it easy to sympathize with the long dead, somewhat forgotten, very misunderstood pharoah.

k

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:iconkajm:
Very well done. There is the thinking by some, that this is exactly how things could be in that Sleep, waiting to reach the Other Side.

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"they made your kind, though I suspect they would say that God made your kindred, they only amplified what was already there."
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